Awareness (A Poem of Brutal Murder)

black to the good ol' days of violent poetry. i just right it as i go, doesn't rhyme this time... doesn't need to.



I stalk a girl for a while
she doesn't even notice
I follow her to her house and notice where she hides the key
i go in and she doesn't notice
probably cause she's taking a shower,
cause of the water she doesn't notice
but she notices when i grab her by the hair
and pull her out
she notices then
she's naked and crying, her face hits the tile floor
blood squirts out of her nose, and her eyes are swelled
i pull out some rope, and bound her to the bathtub
she doesn't notice that, cause she's too busy...
getting a bleeder knife stuck up her cunt
it goes into the sidelines, creates a vaccum... gets stuck
she doesn't notice the vaccum, but she does notice the pain

i decide not to rape her though, she passes out...
maybe from the bloodloss, i don't know
her husband had never noticed though, he walked into the bedroom
took off his shoes, and got on the bed
he says he wants some loving
i walk in, he doesn't notice me,
too busy staring at some picture of their wedding day
i pull out an icepick, stab him in the throat
i go black to his wife, rip out her eyes and tongue
leave her to see if she dies or maybe she can get the cops in time

she didn't notice me leave, and she bled to death...
i didn't get laid that night, but there are plenty of them in the sea
they don't even notice me watch them
good for me.

That eyes and tounge thing made me gag

......wow .....lol

Yet Another Great "Poem" By Carsito.

Stasiax94 wrote:

That eyes and tounge thing made me gag

That Made You Gag? Do You Have A Stomach Made Of Tissue Paper?

lol, now please tell hizzle that i am a great poet. he would be proud.