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PostSubject: a sad story I wrote   Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:10 pm

just something I wrote while in my "depressed" moods

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Nayt awakes at his house and gets ready for school. His cell phone rings and it's a friend of his. Her name is Catina.

Nayt-Wut up?


Catina-I need to talk to you.


Nayt-yeah? what about?


Catina-I...I can't talk over this phone. I need to see you in person. meet me by the big oak in front of school.

The phone hangs up and Nayt finishes getting dressed and heads out to the school. He ets there and meets Catina. Catina is sitting down with her back to the tree messing with her phone.

Nayt-Catina? what's wrong?

Catina gets up and walks to Nayt. She plays with her shirt and looks down.

Catina-Well....I like you

Nayt- I like you too but what did you want to tell me?

Catina-.....(silence).....

Catina walks up to Nayt and kisses him. He's stunned and shocked. The bell rings and Catina rushes away to first hour classes.
After school Nayt walks out and starts home. He gets a call from his friend.
Nayt- yo?

Friend-Dude get to the park. there's a fight you gotta see.HURRY!

Nayt-aight I'm on my way.
Nayt runs to the city park. He meets his friend and they watch as to boys go at it over a girl. The girl sits there watching them. A crowd soon forms around them and they start to fight.

Nayt is now at home and is checking his email. He goes onto myspace and finds a new bulletin. It's by Catina. The title says"can somone call the cops and tell them to come to my house?". He opens it and it reads as follows

Catina's Bulletin- I'm sorry everyone. Life's gotten too hard. I can't stand it. I only regret leaving behind Nayt. He meant eveything to me. I love him. So good bye everyone. It was nice while it lasted but I'm afraid it's over.

Nayt gets his phone and dials Catina's number.

Nayt to self-what is going on!? I hope she's alright...

The phone doesn't answer. Nayt panics and leaves his house again. He heads towards Catina's house and knocks on the door. It opens when he touches it. He rushes in and jumps up the stairs to her room. He kicks down the door and almost fals back by what he saw. Catina is sitting in a corner with both of her wrists slit badly and blood was pooring from them like niagra falls.She's just barely alive.

Catina-Nayt....I've always loved you. I was there to comfort you when you were sad. I know you would've done the same. But It can't go on like this. Good bye.

Nayt runs to her side and holds her in his arms. He starts to sob. His shirt is mixed with tears and blood now. Slowly he leans back and kisses her.

Nayt- I love you.......

Nayt takes out the revolver he carries with him. He checks to see if it's loaded. One bullet. He cocks the gun back and aims at his head.

Nayt-I can't stand to be without you. Catina I'm coming....

A gun shot is heard and the police come to investigate. They find two bodies joined together hand in hand.

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Wed Jun 20, 2007 2:55 pm

wow...alot more deep than we thought possible from you...very good, short story, make it longer. hell it'd make a perty good book...we'd read it. and we cant really comment on "depressed mood's" we don't get them, we're always happy.

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:27 pm

Ermac wrote:
wow...alot more deep than we thought possible from you...very good, short story, make it longer. hell it'd make a perty good book...we'd read it. and we cant really comment on "depressed mood's" we don't get them, we're always happy.

meh
this is what happens when I write and listen to emo music at the same time
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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Tue Jul 10, 2007 2:20 pm

Dark Raiden wrote:
wow...alot more deep than we thought possible from you...very good, short story, make it longer. hell it'd make a perty good book...we'd read it. and we cant really comment on "depressed mood's" we don't get them, we're always happy.


true up till after we'd read it

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Tue Jul 10, 2007 2:25 pm

Omg thats so good. And pretty. It makes me cry. Ur a really good writer?
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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:20 am

stasia94 wrote:
Omg thats so good. And pretty. It makes me cry. Ur a really good writer?

uh that's a question,right?

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Thu Jul 19, 2007 10:01 am

lol aww its like one of those sad things that are posted on myspace..

thank god i haven't seen one i a while

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Thu Jul 19, 2007 10:03 am

Bab3y Ac3 wrote:
lol aww its like one of those sad things that are posted on myspace..

thank god i haven't seen one i a while

LOL
it's called EMOspace for a reason though
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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:26 am

lol no wrong...there is an emo space...these is also a high myspace...

and a whole slew of spaces..

anyways ignore all the stupid comments about u p.p....I didn't remember who everyone was....

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:31 am

Bab3y Ac3 wrote:
lol no wrong...there is an emo space...these is also a high myspace...

and a whole slew of spaces..

anyways ignore all the stupid comments about u p.p....I didn't remember who everyone was....

will do

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Thu Aug 02, 2007 8:38 am

ok cool...

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:56 pm

Reminds me off Romeo and Juilet. I love it *appluases*

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:38 am

volorios wrote:
stasia94 wrote:
Omg thats so good. And pretty. It makes me cry. Ur a really good writer?

uh that's a question,right?


Oh I screwed up, I meant a period, not a question mark

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PostSubject: Re: a sad story I wrote   Fri Aug 17, 2007 11:39 am

Stasiax94 wrote:
volorios wrote:
stasia94 wrote:
Omg thats so good. And pretty. It makes me cry. Ur a really good writer?

uh that's a question,right?


Oh I screwed up, I meant a period, not a question mark

it's alright sir

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